rate this rap for me?
March 30th, 2010 by admin | 7 Comments | Filed in Rap and Hip-HopI finished my homework early the other night, and just decided to write this for fun. But then i read over it and i kinda liked it. Just so you know i’ve never rapped before or anything so don’t except rakim-like lyrics it was just for fun. btw it’s not finished i kinda hit a writers block, and i can take your critisism be honest.
It’s about all those underrated mc’s out there (not me) who have talent and work hard, but never made it.
there’s a man out there,
who knows his life ain’t fair,
cuz he’s an mc and has yet to be seen,
yet to drop an album, yet to impress his son
or cop a spot on the hot,
list of rappers who got what’s gotta be got,
he walks in his street,
lookin over his shoulder,
scared to get beat,
by the thugs he owes presidents,
for the drugs he does in his residence,
he’s seen desperate times,
stared into the barrels of nines,
God’s given him no signs,
all he’s got are his rhymes,
he spits fire in his lines,
humiliates those who cross him,
till they beg for him to just go and win,
he hears bout rappers in their diamond penthouses,
walkin arm in arm with twenty-eight spouses,
they think they better than him,
just cuz they got more chedder than him,
but when they’re lazy n’ chillin,
he’s skillin,
mc’s he’s killin, cuz he’s lyrics are illin,
he’s a real killa,
blood spilla, drug sella,
got guns in the cella,
everything he tell ya,
is legit,
the cash he get,
comes from his own sweat,
everything he got he earned,
knows how to go out in victory,
but can also get burned,
retains his dignity,
he lives his raps,
the stories he spins bout bustin caps,
bout shooting dice and totin gats,
are all from experience,
so it don’t make sense,
that he’s still in dump,
workin a gas pump,
but this pain ain’t mine,
i know my life’s fine so why write this line,
cuz i know out there this man is real, tonight his son won’t get to dine
because his life ain’t fine,
at least not like mine,
every night he bows his head in prayer,
he wishes his son could be mayor,
or that his life was more fair,
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